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PostSubject: Shikanura Willow/Hokage (Incomplete)   Mon Dec 01, 2008 10:25 am

Name:Shikanura Willow

Alias:The Sleeping Dragon

Appearence:

Age:19

Birth Place:Stone.

Village:Leaf.

Rank:Hokage.

Personality:He is the silent type.But when it comes to battle he will become serious or happy.He doesn´t talks much.

Speacial Characteristics:9 Tails.8 Gates.

Clan:Willow

Clan History:This was a clan that lived in Stone.They got all dead in a massacre exept for Shikanura.They have the Rain control kekkei genkia.They ware a feared Clan but now..Only Shikanura is left.

Kekkei Genkai:He can control Rain.

Weapons:Katana.

Chakra Element:1-Fire.
2-Earth.
3-Water.

Speacialties:Main:Ninjutsu.
Sub:Taijutsu.

History/Background:He was born in the Stone village.He lived in the Clan town until the Massacre.A monk saved him andf tooked him.They trained him very hard for him to become Tsuchikage.They trained him day and night without stoping.He could drink a glass of water each 5 hours he trained.To eat only 10 minutes.He was a slave of thei´re training.He tryed to run one night but he was catched.They taked him to the guards and got slashed 50 times.1 Night he runned away with his friend.The friend got killed but he survived.He runned to Leaf villlage trying to escape.They ware in a battle for Hokage so he become it himself.He started training alot.He learned with Gai sensei grandchildren how to open his gates.Gai sensei grandchildren trained Shikanura to open them,but it looked like he couldn´t.Shikanura trained,days,days,days.He couldn´t train more.He was tired.He decided to train one last time.In the last time the Gai sensei Grandchildren told him the secret to open the.Shikanura made what he said.Day to day.He entered the battlefield 1 day and he could open 3 gates.The train continued,and continued,until the seventh gate.He warned Shikanura that just trying to learn the 8 could kill him.Shikanura needed a good way to learn and don´t die.Shika remembered of the Kyubi lefts.He raced to the temple where they ware keeped safe.He stole them.He was hunted down by the monks everyday until he came back to Leaf.A long trip,full of enemies.He arrived.He got to a friend house who was an Exorcist.Shikanura asked him to implant the demon on him,so he wouldn´t die.The Exorcist refused,but Shikanura punished him and made him do it.He suffered for 24 hours.The implant was over and Kyuubi was inside him.Shikanura arrived the training field and opened the seventh gate.All or nothing,he decided to open the eighth gate.He din´t died.The kyuubi power was enough to save him.He learned all opf the gates,and he got the Kyuubi.He knew that to become Hokage,he needed to win over people hears and defeat the Hokage.He started giving money,food,equipement,Alot....The Hokage was mad for him beeing so pupolar and taking out the Hokage popularity.Hokage left secretly in the officer lefting a clone behing.The Hokage wandered the starteets looking for him to kill him.He founded him and challenged him to a battle in the Chuunin stadium.Shikanura accepeted.he knew it was the time.Shikanura preapred and entered the staiduam.A battle of 10 days lasted there.Without stopping they battle until one dyed.Shikanura and the Hokage fell to the ground.The Kyuubi started regenerating Shikanura body.he got up with little of his force and taked the hokage head off.It was cruel,yet he dieserve it.He only had bring chaos to the village.He standed up and rised the head.he proclamed himseld the Hokage,and the people accepted,because they loved him.Assassins from the Rain village teyed to kill him.He sended an entire Anbu troops to counter them,and he left on a trip.He arrived Amegakure to make peace between the villages.He passed secretly by guards and enetered the officer.With a strange deal,no one ever knew.They made Peace.Nothing bad has happened until the moment.

Role Play Sample:
Shikanura Willow was having a walk on the park."Hi Miss Toyama!"He said to an old lady passing by.What is she doing in the rain...She can get a cold...."Shikanura such a gentleman everyday I meet you."She whispered."You still funny!"He yelled smiling."You can catch a cold out here."He grabed the old lady and runned into her hosue."There you go!If you need something just ask."He said smiling and leaved."Such a gentleman!"Miss Toyama said entering the house.


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PostSubject: Re: Shikanura Willow/Hokage (Incomplete)   Tue Dec 02, 2008 10:02 pm

Before you continue with this app...


1. You cannot have the 9 tails.
2. You cannot have the 8 gates unless providing a good explaination in your history.
3. I don't mind the Rain Control, but why would that technique be in Stone Country?
4. Btw, Rain is not an element, it's considered Water.
5. If you want to be Hokage, be prepared to make a long history on how you earned it. It's a very powerful position.
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PostSubject: Re: Shikanura Willow/Hokage (Incomplete)   Wed Dec 03, 2008 6:45 am

Jutsus:
Rain Style-

Artifical Rain- Able to create rain with a water source and chakra control

Reverse Rain- Use chakra to make rain go upwards instead of down

Rotating Rain- Rain spins in a circle and can be used with other jutsus

Rain Stop- Able to make rain stop mid air with chakra control

Umberlla Technique-Uses chakra to keep rain off self

Heavy Rain- Able to focus rain on enemy to cover them in rain that weighs them down

Big Rain- Able to make the raindrops bigger to cover more area

Rain Clones-Clones made of rain

Rain Spear- Forms giant spear from rain

Rain Spikes- Spikes form from every raindrop after handsigns formed

Rain Renaissance- restores items or buildings that have been destroyed and heals people it touches

Hidden Rain- Changes form to mimic rainfall to disappear in battle/recon

Rain transformation- A move that is used to move quickly in the rain by becoming part of the rain

Rain Needles- Senbon that are hidden in the rain strike from all directions

Rain Dagger- By focusing chakra and gathering rain, user is able to form a knife that can cut stone

Rain Bullets- Able to turn rain into bullet forn and fire them at wanted target

Sheild of Rain- Forms rain into a wall that is strong as metal

Rain Sword- Using chakra and rain user can form a sword

Rain Cloud Shell- Using rain and the clouds user forms a protective armor that can even stand to lightning

Rain Knives- Able to create blades out of rain but only can reach so far

Vortex Rain- High level jutsu that uses chakra to pull down the rain clouds themselves and surrounds user with the oppenet. Moves so fast neither can escape but allows rain attacks from all directions.

Suffocating Nimbus: when us oppenent is trapped in the vortex rain u force the cloud down their throat

Other Rain Techniques-

*Pillar of Rain-makes pillars around the opponent
*Rain Trident-makes a sharp trident
*Flight of the Rain Dragons-rain frms a giant dragon
*Hundered Rain Reflections-make millions of illusion clones


Dai Endan - Great Fireball
Character Use: Jiraiya
Rank: B
Note: Senjutsu
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack


Dai Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. Jiraiya will first gather the fire into his mouth and then spew a giant breath of fire constantly at his opponent.

Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Character Use: Uchiha Sasuke, Yamashiro Aoba, Uchiha Fugaku, Uchiha Obito, Uchiha Itachi, Hatake Kakashi
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack


Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique
Character Use: Uchiha Sasuke
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack, Supplementary


Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.

Haisekishou - Burning Ash Accumulation
Character Use: Sarutobi Asuma
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack


Katon • Haisekishou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed handseals, Asuma will expel an ash from his mouth. This large cloud begin to envelope his foe and when Asuma clicks his teeth, the cloud will ignite in an explosion.

Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Viz Translation: Fire Style ~ Fireball Technique & also as Blaze of Glory
Character Use: Uchiha Sasuke, Uchiha Itachi
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack


Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai

Kai - Release
Character Use: Higher Level General Skill
Rank: Unknown
Range: -
Type: Supplementary


Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name:The 5 Fingers Summon
Rank:A
Type:Summoning.

This jutsu summons 4 animals each time i bite my fingers.5 fingers,5 animals.
1-Wolf
2Falcon
3-Tiger
4-Moneky
5-Panda
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PostSubject: Re: Shikanura Willow/Hokage (Incomplete)   Wed Dec 03, 2008 6:52 am

Karyuudan - Fire Dragon Projectile
Character Use: Third Hokage
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Anime Only


Katon • Karyuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and create mud projectiles using the Doryuudan technique. The ninja will then blow a large flame to ignite the mud projectiles.

Karyuu Endan - Fire Dragon Flame Projectile
Character Use: Third Hokage
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack


Katon • Karyuu Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and the proceeds to blow a large jet of fire from their mouth.

Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu - Mist Waltz Technique
Character Use: Fuuma Kagerou
Rank: Unknown
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Anime Only


Katon • Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and then proceeds to blow a large combustible mist at the target. When the mist hits flame, it will ignite in an explosion of fire.

Dynamic • Action (Dainamikku • Akushon)
Character Use: Maito Gai
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Anime Only


Dynamic Action is a taijutsu technique used by Maito Gai. Gai will launch himself at his opponent and then use a barrage of strikes and kicks.


Dynamic • Entry (Dainamikku • Entorii)
Character Use: Maito Gai
Rank: D
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack


Dynamic Entry is a taijutsu technique used by Maito Gai. Gai will throw a kunai to distract his targets attention, he will then use his speed and agility to quickly approach and attack his opponent from their blind side.


Konoha Dai Senpuu - Leaf Great Whirlwind
Character Use: Rock Lee
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack


Konoha Dai Senpuu is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Leaf ninja Rock Lee. Like the normal Senpuu, Lee uses his quickness and agility to deliver a series powerful spinning kicks to his opponent.

Konoha Gouriki Senpuu - Leaf Strong Whirlwind
Character Use: Maito Gai
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack


Konoha Gouriki Senpuu is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Leaf ninja Maito Gai. Like the normal Senpuu, Gai uses his quickness and agility to deliver a powerful roundhouse kick to his opponent.


Konoha Kage Buyou - Leaf Shadow Dance
Character Use: Rock Lee, Uchiha Sasuke, Hatake Kakashi
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary


Konoha Kage Buyou is a Taijutsu technique that is used to position a ninja's opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. The ninja will first quickly appear below their opponent, then with a switch upper kick they will launch their target into the air. The ninja will then jump into the air to "shadow" the target with the target's back to their chest. Rock Lee uses the Konoha Kage Bayou to place his opponent into a position to do his Omote Renge technique. Uchiha Sasuke would go on to copy this move to set up his opponent for his Shishi Rendan technique.


Omote Renge - Front Lotus
Character Use: Rock Lee, Hatake Kakashi
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack


Omote Renge is a Taijutsu technique which was forbidden due to the strain it puts on a ninja's body. By opening the first of the Celestial Gates, the Initial Gate, the ninja is able to release the restraints in the brain and push the body farther. In Lee's case, he was able to increase his speed and power. To utilize the Omote Renge, Lee first loosens the bandages around his arm. With a quick dash he is suddenly below his target and a quick upward kick sends his opponent skyward. Lee then jumps into the air to place his chest to the back of his opponent. He then wraps his arms and the bandages around his opponent to prevent escape. As the pair begin their fall back to earth, Lee begins to spin downwards at a high rate of speed, driving his opponent head first into the ground. At the last moment Lee himself releases the bandages and jumps to the clear. Though the technique injures his opponent, it also takes its toll on Lee's body as well.

Asakujaku - Morning Peacock
Character Use: Maito Gai
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack


Asakujaku is a taijutsu technique used by Maito Gai. Gai first opens the sixth Celestial Gate Keimon, which gives him access to an enormous amount of chakra. Using this tremendous burst of power and speed, he will approach his opponent in a distinctive stance. When near enough, he will kick his opponent and launch them into the air. He will then strike them multiple times, causing the distinctive peacock fan to develop. His opponent will then fall back to the earth, covered in the strike's aura.

Gourai Rensa - Strong Thunder Lotus Chain
Character Use: Rock Lee
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Movie Three Only


Gourai Rensa is a taijutsu technique used by Rock Lee. Lee first opens a celestial gate to increase his speed, he then uses his extending chain weapon to wrap up his opponent and launch them into the air. Lee himself will then launch into the air and begin a barrage of strikes, knocking his opponent back towards the ground. He will then finish them off with a strong strike right into the ground itself.

Konoha Dai Senkou - Leaf Great Light Rotation
Character Use: Maito Gai
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Anime Only


Konoha Dai Senkou is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Maito Gai. After charging his opponent, Gai will unleash a powerful kick which will spin his opponent away.


Konoha Shoufuu - Leaf Rising Wind
Character Use: Rock Lee
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack


Konoha Shoufuu is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Leaf ninja Rock Lee. Using his quickness and agility, Lee with do a swift upwards kick at his opponent or at a weapon his opponent is wielding.


Seishun furu pawaa! - Springtime of Youth Full Power!
Character Use: Rock Lee
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Anime Only

Seishun furu pawaa is a Taijutsu technique utilized by Rock Lee. Lee will go all out against his opponent by first launching them into the air. He will then kick them and follow up with another powerfull

Ura Renge - Reverse Lotus
Character Use: Rock Lee
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack


Ura Renge is a Taijutsu technique which was forbidden due to the strain it puts on a ninja's body. To complete the technique, Lee had to open the first five of the Celestial Gates. By opening the first of the Celestial Gates, the Initial Gate, the ninja is able to release the restraints in the brain and push the body farther. In Lee's case, he was able to increase his speed and power. By opening the second gate, the Heal Gate, Lee was able to temporarily increase his stamina. With the opening of the Third Gate, the Life Gate, Lee's body turns a shade of red and he is able to perform the Ura Renge. When Lee performed the technique though, he also opened the fourth gate, the Harm Gate, and the fifth gate, the Limit Gate. Opening the gates removes the limiters placed on the body, and by opening these gates Lee was given a great increase in power in speed. The technique was forbidden though because as each subsquent gate is opened, the body faces more and more strain. When Lee opened the fifth gate, his muscles began to snap.

To utilize the Ura Renge, Lee will open the first three Celestial Gates. Then, like Omote Renge, he quickly moves beneath the target and kicks them upwards. While in the air Lee will then pummel his opponent throughout the air with high speed Taijutsu attacks to weaken them. Then at the apex of his attack he will strike his opponent in the chest towards the ground. Lee then moves in close to his opponent and attaches his bandage. Lee will then allow his opponent to get some distance, he then pulls his target back to his body and does a hard downward palm strike to their chest causing them to crash into the ground with massive damage.
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PostSubject: Re: Shikanura Willow/Hokage (Incomplete)   Wed Dec 03, 2008 7:24 pm

Ahem. Well...
I'm trying hard to be nice and all, but this is hard.
You're app is way to OP. A Kage is supposed to be strong, but not ridiculously unbeatable. >.>

For starters, It's one or the other. Either you are a excellent Taijutsu user and can open your gates, or you have the Kyuubi. It's not going to be both. Ever.

On top of that, some of your Rain Jutsus are not required. They're basically water techniques, not rain.

- Rain Clones-Clones made of rain (Water clones)
- Rain Spear- Forms giant spear from rain (Rain can't form into weapons, water on the other hand, maybe.)
- Rain Dagger- By focusing chakra and gathering rain, user is able to form a knife that can cut stone (1. Maybe water could, not rain. 2. Water cutting through stone?)
- Sheild of Rain- Forms rain into a wall that is strong as metal (As strong as metal?)
- Rain Sword- Using chakra and rain user can form a sword (No.)
- Rain Cloud Shell- Using rain and the clouds user forms a protective armor that can even stand to lightning (How can you possibly control clouds now? And be strong against lightning??)
- Vortex Rain- High level jutsu that uses chakra to pull down the rain clouds themselves and surrounds user with the oppenet. Moves so fast neither can escape but allows rain attacks from all directions.(Ugh. Not happeneing.)
- Suffocating Nimbus: when us oppenent is trapped in the vortex rain u force the cloud down their throat. (Too OP. Remove.)
- Rain Trident-makes a sharp trident (No weapons from rain, maybe water...)
- Flight of the Rain Dragons-rain frms a giant dragon (Possible, but very unrealistic)
- Hundered Rain Reflections-make millions of illusion clones (Millions? Ha! Not happening. Maybe dozens.)
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